Handwriting Practice

[mattiapavinati8647]

みなさん、こんにちは

I'm pretty new in this forum, my knowledge level is still "absolute beginner".
Since i really like the japanese writing system, i spend a lot of time studying it. I'd really like to know from you all, if you find my hand writings hard to read, or just unpleasant.
I'm working hard to improve it, so any feedback is welcome! (=^.^=)
ありがとうございます。

[community.japanese]

Hello 真修さん、
Thank you for posting your writing.
That’s really good.
However, that’s shame because the last すis not there.
Also can you make sure the left radical of 私?
Yuki　由紀
Team JapanesePod101.com

[mattiapavinati8647]

こんにちは由紀さん、
the "real" image has the ending す, maybe the image was too big and got clipped by the forum.
You can find the original one here : http://i371.photobucket.com/albums/oo157/Pavinati/test1.png.
And thanks for the clarification on the 私 kanji, i didn't notice the difference at first.
ありがとうございます。

真修

[community.japanese]

Hello 真修さん、
見ましたよ。
That’s good.
Yuki 　由紀
Team JapanesePod101.com

[thegooseking]

That left radical of 私 causes all sorts of problems. The mistake I made for a while was that, instead of saying that I'd done something, I was claiming that Buddha had done it, because I was missing a few strokes and writing 仏 instead of 私

小狼

[community.japanese]

小狼san,
I didn’t realize the similarity between 仏 and　私.
Now you know they are different.
I think we can learn something from mistakes so you will never forget it.
Yuki 由紀
Team JapanesePod101.com