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Please help me check these sentence.

Postby NimmanNapatra8035 » May 27th, 2014 2:34 pm

I'm now working on Beginner lesson, but I want to improve better so I find other books to support the grammar. I try to create some sentences according to the book's example accompany with the words I have been learning from JapanesePod101. I would be appreciate it if someone can check them for me.

This is to use に in the sentence about time (and place)
Example : He comes here once a year.
Japanese : 彼は一年に一度ここに来ます。
1) I eat cake once a month. 
私は一月に一度ケーキを食べます。
2) She goes to meet him around 3 days a week.
彼女は一週に三日くらい彼を会います。
3) That person goes to the pool once a month.
あの人は一月に一度プールへ行きます。
4) When my elder brother feel lonely, he will go there.
私の兄さんは寂しいの時にあそこに行きます。
5) When he has free time, he will go to the book stores.
彼は暇の時に本売り場に行きます。
6) He studies at home.
彼は家にべんきょうします。
7) My elder sister's boy friend goes to library once a week.
僕の姉さんの彼氏は一週に二回図書館に行きます。
8) The truth is that she meets her father only two days in a year.
実に、彼女は一年に二日だけ父さんを会います。
9) She watches movie in her free time.
彼女は暇の時に映画をみます。
10) He sees his senior's face once a day.
彼は一日に一度先輩の顔を見えます。

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Re: Please help me check these sentence.

Postby community.japanese » May 28th, 2014 10:06 am

NimmanNapatra8035 san,

You have been working hard! すごいですね。
There are my suggestions.

1) I eat cake once a month. 
私は一月に一度ケーキを食べます。correct! :D

2) She goes to meet him around 3 days a week.
彼女は一週間に三日くらい彼を会います。You should put 間 after 一週.

3) That person goes to the pool once a month.
あの人は一月に一度プールへ行きます。correct :D

4) When my elder brother feels lonely, he will go there.
私の兄は寂しい時にあそこに行きます。 You should use 兄(あに)for your brother. お兄さん or 兄さん are for someone
else's older brother. Also you don't need to put の before 時 because 寂しい is i-adjective.

5) When he has free time, he will go to the book stores.
彼は暇の時に本売り場に行きます。売り場 is "department" and store means 店(みせ).
In this case 本屋(ほんや)should be the best.

6) He studies at home.
彼は家でべんきょうします。location marker is "で".

7) My elder sister's boy friend goes to library once a week.
僕の姉の彼氏は一週間に1回図書館に行きます。The same point as number 4. once is 1.

8) The truth is that she meets her father only two days a year.
事実は、彼女は一年に二日だけ父さんを会うということです。I think you have learnt this sentence structure, AはBです.

9) She watches movies in her free time.
彼女は暇な時に映画をみます。 暇な is na-adjective.

10) He sees his senior's face once a day.
彼は一日に一度先輩の顔を見ます。見えますmeans "can see".

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Re: Please help me check these sentence.

Postby NimmanNapatra8035 » May 30th, 2014 4:17 pm

Thank you very much! I will review these.. I guess I need to spend more time on grammar points!

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Re: Please help me check these sentence.

Postby community.japanese » June 1st, 2014 8:01 am

NimmanNapatra8035 san,
Practice makes perfect.
Let’s study with us.
If you have questions, please feel free to ask us.
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Re: Please help me check these sentence.

Postby doodoofan6899 » September 1st, 2014 2:08 pm

Wow, you've written so many sentences there. I agree, practice makes perfect.
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Re: Please help me check these sentence.

Postby community.japanese » September 9th, 2014 5:56 am

doodoofan6899 san,

konnichiwa.
You also can practise writing here. :D

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